Responding to destiny's audio tour.The beginning wasn't interesting and didn't grasp my attention.Towards the middle and the ending the piece became very exciting and dramatic. I thought it was really good but they should of made more entertaining o…
This is for Mariah Elmo audio peice.
I loved your narration. It was so detailed and well-written. You are an excellent writer. I especially like that you addressed me in the into. "You are standing..." I feel like I would get more of a sense of myse…
This is about Tiffany's audio tour.
The narration is beautiful. I loved the line about the pole that screams lonely and the light that hangs like a chandelier. You are an amazing writer. I feel like there could be more backgroudn noise. Without it,…
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I'm back and I'm replying to
(mayra audio tour)
I like how you start off with a very soft voice and low volume and turning your voice higher as you get to the descriptions of the garden.
The element-opening the gate- helps me visualize you openi…
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My name is Phuong Tseng and I'm an intern of outLoud.
I'm from Vietnam.
And I'll be
replying to (01_destiny_audio_tour)
I like how you describes Mr.Bob's life and his contributions to the neighborhood. It give me a sense of what kind of person h…
Angie,
I liked your description. It gave me a good idea of what your neighborhood looked like. Going back in the past gave me an image of how it looked, and how it has changed over time. It weaved in nicely to make an interesting story about your m…
This piece is had great discriptions of where you guys are located and about the orginization. When listening i liked i liked the detail about ripe mongoes, four cement blocks, and especially the screen door. When i heard that part it was like imaga…
Ana, your writing is lovely. One thing I like about the description of Patricia is the regularity of everything -- she comes out every day at the same time; she's always carrying the same stuff; she wants everything to look identically neat -- "not…
We use Audacity. Blech. I'm trying to figure out what makes the most sense for the long run... We don't have much of a budget, and Pro-Tools requires those pesky little M-Boxes. I'm wondering if Audition or something like that would make more sense financially. I use ProTools at home, so I'd prefer that... Anyway...If you have any thoughts about this, please send them my way!
Hey Sarah, remember me? We met in Chicago. We have a few stories up on the web--
http://prx.org/groups/cityhighradio
It is not easy to do, this high school radio thing! But it's been a great year and we're expanding the program next year. I'd love to get more pointers from you sometime soon. You're my radio hero!
Sarah
At 12:57pm on February 28, 2008, Noah Miller said…
Sarah, you're awesome! Thank you so much for encouraging your students to comment on outLoud's piece. Every single comment so far has had something we really can use to make the story better.
rock on,
Noah